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Author: [livejournal.com profile] amiciperpetuum
Prompt: #197 -Fundawear
Title: Originals Preferred
Pairing(s): Kyusung
Summary: Kyuhyun does some online shopping and the result is far from what he expected.
Rating: R
Word Count : 8k
Warnings: Possibly bad writing?

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Date: 2013-08-09 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dislex1a.livejournal.com
First off, thank you so much for picking my prompt, dear author!! <333 I have to say that I was pretty excited when I saw that it was picked, and I'm glad you decided to write it too, because the fic is totally different from what I was expecting, which is not a bad thing at all! LOL TBH when I first posted the prompt, I expected something a little bit more crack-filled, so it's nice to see how you've managed to turn it into something a lot sweeter than the source material suggests XD

I really like the way Kyu's so awkward in the whole fic. Poor baby, he's so guilty about hurting Yesung - at first I didn't understand why he was so hesitant to go in and see Yesung, but the whole idea of Yesung falling off the bed because he was so surprised by Kyu's present? That was hilarious, even if Yesung got hurt (and had to be sent to hospital? yikes no wonder Kyu's so guilty!). The whole idea of electronic underwear is inherently funny in nature, but I do admire the way you've managed to highlight a serious drawback in the design. And yes I can completely see it being one of Kyu's great ideas at the start that ends up blowing up in his face.

What I enjoyed the most though was the interaction between Kyu and Ye, especially the way that you've kept the relationship so equal (LOL I know we've had this conversation before about how both of them are not totally dom/sub with each other). There's such a nice push and pull between the two of them and it makes the fic so much fun to read because you can feel just how much they care about each other, but at the same time, how much they like to tease. I laughed a lot at Kyu's ego though. Yep, that'll definitely be the death of him one of these days. Also the way that you've mixed in Yesung's family and the difficulties of trying to keep their relationship a secret from the Yesung's mum and Jongjin, made everything feel much more realistic, which I appreciated. LOL at the soft toys in their laps when Jongjin came in! That's so funny.

Anyway, thank you again for picking my prompt! I loved what you made of it :D (and no, I won't throw anything at you, so don't worry ;)

Date: 2013-08-11 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhenny.livejournal.com
Hi! Thank you for writing this fic^^
I have a strange adoration for awkward!Kyu XD he's so cute when he acts that way~
*screams for seductive/sexy/every-word-in-the-dictionary-that-can-describe-Yesung's-sexiness Jongwoon!*
Too bad Jongjin has a bad timing! I bet the two of them were looking forward to-... Hahahaha! No more comment XD

Thanks again^^ I liked reading it~

Date: 2013-08-13 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allspecialsmile.livejournal.com
I love all that awkwardness that led to the sweetness. Kyuhyun is so adorable like that <3
Their relationship was really interesting : it was balanced, and the constant fear of being caught makes it really realistic. I liked that.
I wanted to scream when Jongjin appeared at the end xD

Thank you for this story ♥


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